Monday, November 17, 2008

Blog #8

The sugestions were very helpful and as always i will make my paper better stronger and longer. and check my spelling

Blog #7

Blog #6

I plan to find a library to find books over my topic, i have actually been to two different sources(library) and one i found vague sources and the other nothing. i plan to find newspapers for articles over my topic at my lcoal library or kyvl.

Blog #5

I learned to search for material and how to write it down using persuasive writing. i have learned how to try to persuade somone to think a certain way without hurting anothers values or believes.

Blog #4

I feel i made my paper so much better. I made my paper longer but better anding more detail and bettering my sources. I have better learned how to search to fin d better sources and to better write a paper.

Blog #3

The suggestions were very helpful. i used the sugestions such as to make my paper more lenghty and to find better sources. i will examine all and and use them the best i can.
i will find moresources for my paper to make it more lenghty. also i will check for spelling errors, and transitions.

blog # 2

http://www.spout.com/members/0/tags/telekinesis/MemberTagFilms.aspxThis site was dedicated to find sources for movies involved with telekinesis.

http://www.usatoday.com/tech/news/2004-11-05-teleportation_x.htm
This site was helpful by giving information about the military and their involvement in telekinesis

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Psychokinesis
This site was useful for the information about the history and the use of telekinesis.

http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index?qid=20081602150934AAbj0Ik
This site was useful because i has information dealing with CIA's involvement in telekinesis

http://www.theintentionexperiment.com/the_experiments
This site had some good info but not necessarily helpful for my essay